Tuesday, October 15, 2013


Dialogue
PART ONE

Christian:  hi… passed through here… I recognized you and. I wondered if we could be friends
Blanca:    well, maybe… if you let me see your profile…. I can think of..
Christian:  I wrote a couple  days ago
Blanca:   let’s see… your name is Christian, 21 years old (slightly younger)… and you like tennis... (It´s too original)
Christian:  we have friends in common?
Blanca: ah, yes, off course… and I remember you…
… We met us at Denny’s party … you don´t seem a bad person… come on, we can to be friends
Christian:  great, great, great, --Piensa-- oh yeah she will be my next girlfriend
Hey, did you get the pictures?
Blanca: yes, but I think you don´t appear in any photo.
Christian:  can I see the pics?
Blanca: well okay…
Christian:  what a night… I’ll never forget that party…. In this photo you look so beautiful
Blanca: thanks
Christian:  and look at…. In the end it seems that I’m in one… I’m back and unfocused
Blanca: Mmmmhu
Christian:  tomorrow …. I am going to go with some friends to dance ….  Will you go?
Blanca:   no, I don´t
Christian:  on Thursday to the cinema
Blanca:   no, I don´t
Christian:  this weekend I’m going to stay with Dennys for a drink… you could come?
Blanca:   well…maybe
Christian:  why not talk a little?
Blanca:   I have things to do…..but, let´s talk, quickly!
Christian:  hi
Blanca:   hi
Christian:  it makes a good day eh?
Blanca:   telephone
Christian:  hello? Someone there?
Dennys: hi Blanca, what will you do on this week?
Blanca: Anything, why?
Dennys:  come on to my party
Blanca:  ok I’m going to login to Facebook because talking telephone is pretty unreal
Dennys: ok, I’m online yet.
Blanca:   Wait a Little; I’ll shake an annoying guy who talks to me on Facebook.
*Conversación con cristian
*“you have a new message” (esto es un mensaje q le sale en el computador a  Blanca)
Blanca:   what is this?
Christian: i think you’re very cool…….tomorrow is my birthday….. You know what I’m thinking?
Blanca:   look dude….. I have hundreds of friends …. And anyone is so annoying like you... You know...… I don´t wanna be your friend………..
*Blanca le escribe a Dennys:
Blanca: I’m already sick of Christian and I’m going to block him.
Dennys: well done, I will leave you, because Karen is talking me in my cellphone.
Blanca ok, bye

PART TWO

*Dennys habla con Karen por el whatsapp
Dennys: hi Karen
Karen: hi, how are you??
Dennys: nice, I gotta tell you something cool
Karen: What is?
Dennys: I met a guy on “Badoo”, his name is Christian and is very handsome
Karen: really Dennys?   And how is he?
Dennys: is the perfect man, his height is 1.87m, is very strong, black eyes, tender and he has a penthouse in “El Poblado”.
Karen: oooooohhh that’s nice, show me his profile…
Dennys: ok, look at his profile
Karen: Is really handsome, you like him?
Dennys: yes, a lot…. but I have never seen him, because his webcam is damaged.
Karen:  and...He likes you?
Dennys: obviously, he says I´m look cute
Karen: --- PIENSA--- She cute? Ha please, she is very ugly, that silly has over 1000 layers of makeup-----
..I am really happy for you, I'm glad you found someone
Dennys: thanks --PIENSA-- I’ll ask her if she is dating someone….although probably not, because no one´s hold----
Karen, do you have boyfriend?
Karen:--PIENSA---the truth I don’t but i will do that she believes I ‘am dating with someone for that she don't feel important---
Yes friend, my new boyfriend is Brad, do you remind him?
Dennys: yes, the guy from the neighborhood
Karen: yes he is, look at his new pictures, is very handsome
Dennys: the truth her more or less, he doesn´t my type of person ---PIENSA---- is very attractive----
why social networks don´t  say that you have a relation ship.
Karen: --PIENSA------- What can I say her?--- He told me that it wasn´t necessary and that, only we have to know it, it´s so romantic.
Dennys: ok, look, we are going to go out to take a dinner in a Luxury restaurant and then we will go to whatch his match of tennis.
Karen: I wish you good luck, I gotta go, my boyfriend is waiting me, we are going to the shopping center
Dennys: Ok, I will go tomorrow, I need to buy  the best dress for dinner with Christian.

Karen: Goodbye Dennys, i hope see you soon.

Saturday, September 28, 2013

First report

1. Why did you choose the topic of your blog?
Today the people lives in a virtual world because the most of thing that we do depends on Internet. by the above, we chose this topic called "social networks" for show some problematics on the society and the bad or good consequences that Internet involves.
2. Structure of the dialogue.  
- History and meaning by social networks. -Advantages and disadvantages. -Social networks on the world of today and on what context it handle.

Sunday, September 8, 2013


"DOUBLE EDGED WEAPON" 



And there was a day that definitely changed his whole life to Facebook . It was no quiet and comfortable life he had with Tatiana , a young provincial with wearing several years of marriage . From a childhood friend had forced him to open a Facebook account with the idea of placing school friends and organize integration , the site had become an obsession and a perfect accomplice to relive past loves , meet women from other cities and even for dates with work colleagues and friends of his wife.

It started as a game. Phrases , words and people returning to hit on her life, her new life. The other , the boring , everyday , was left behind , while everyone was asleep in their beds. However, there was an event , an event that caused ... an absence. Unable to find his first love. " If everyone is on Facebook and she did not , something bad must have happened," thought heat overnight .

He searched and asked the others if they knew anything of it , but nobody knew anything. They had all lost track since college. Then he thought that something terrible must have happened to not be in the social network where everyone was. He sought news in newspapers, in libraries virtual , put his name on Google and Twitter to see if anything appeared , however , the search was in vain. She is not anywhere.

He thought the yellow pages search , maybe some phone was in his name. That too was useless. Then it occurred . Inserted in the social network search the name of the sister of his old love . Your profile appeared instantly . Then looked at the list of friends of his sister , photo by photo, until he found.
You could only see his silhouette and apparently had changed his name , but he was sure it was her. Had finally found!

" What are you doing up at this hour ? " His wife surprised him . "Eh ... ending things in the office, I almost " . "I know that something important happens to you. I felt your absence in bed these last days, " Tatiana said so tender . "Importantly, " the phrase echoed in his head several hours after his wife was able to go to sleep again.

How important could be the woman who mocked his childish ideas of being together for life and after high school had ended for no reason. He gave up the idea of ​​adding it to their Facebook friends . Still have occasional friends and evoking memories with his ex-girlfriends from college through chat , but she , the only woman capable of destabilizing their quiet marriage, would be named as she looked like she wanted to be.

He returned to the room and woke his wife. "It's true that I've been away. I think I let the machine play with my imagination more than they should . But I have learned some and it´s that never let that illusion of closeness that conducive to those people who are away from each other, never more separate me of the I have at my side, what really is important. "


By: PAOLA PIANETA STORY WRITING ARANGO, JUAN MASCARDI, MADA GALIANA, ENRIQUE CASTIBLANCO, SERGIO MENDOZA, VIRGILIO PLATT AND ISSUE OF THE STORY PUBLISHING GROUP.

Bibliography

http://www.cuentocolectivo.com/cuentos-finales/jay-cameron-2/#main